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haloo
ya, ini mungkin kali keberapa saya memposting sesuatu yang original dari saya.
ya, akhir akhir ini saya memang sedang sibuk posting artwork dan lagu di deviantart dan reverbnation, kali ini saya mau berpuisi, yap ini dia
 lebih kurangnya tentang seseorang yang mengalami hari buruk dan mencoba untuk meledak dalam kesendiriannya, hehehe

Wasted to Explode

can you take me to the place,
where I wont get replaced?
like a place with a hum and less pain?

cause I can not make it clear,
got a gun under my chin...
and I am desperately falling down

but you say
everything is under control
but you say
everything just will be fine
cause you say
everything is in right place

but I don't know
You can't miss the show
Oh dont tell me how
just don't want to know

so I explode
so I explode
I am wasted out
to somewhere blur
and gloom
and blur

come rescue me
no one's gonna catch you
going back where you from
going back to the place where you come
and save me.